Madame, Mistress and Maid ~ Mille-Feuille ~ La Fin
That’s a copy of a real french cookbook from the late 1800’s- apparently there’s a lot herring recipes in that one!
We’re at the end of the first lady gays story and now’s the time for you to let me know what you thought.
I borrowed a lot of kink themes from the first Gay butlers story such as Lap sitting, being used as a foot stool and the one in charge reading; but also included different elements such as the Madame being pampered, the fact that the maid (usually the bottom/boy) is the switch character in this dynamic, and the total sub being a very tall, elegant older woman.
In a lot of femdom/bdsm works I find that the dominant woman is usually rather mean so in this one I went with a more caring, if still strict role. There’s an element of denial but also contrasting with excessive pleasure- repeat orgasms/long sessions are a theme throughout my powerplay work.
One thing I struggle with is the worry about objectifying women more than I do men. This is something I tried to combat (even though I’m drawing smut) by making sure the sexual tension is to do with their personalities, not about how much of their bodies they’ll reveal. While objectification is a kink I’ve experimented with for the boys I don’t think I’ll be doing it with the ladies as much- there’s already far too much of that on the internet already. I’m also trying to depict moments of female pleasure as opposed to focusing on specific sex acts where pleasure sometimes isn’t even taken into account.
All in all I really enjoyed this little story and I’m looking forward to doing some more for these to flesh out their dynamic and particular situation. If you have any particular kinks/scenarios you’d like to see please let me know- I can’t promise anything as it might not work with the characters but I’m interested in your preferences! You can always email me or PM on facebook, tumblr or twitter if you’re shy.
I like what you’ve started here. I’m enjoying the dynamic you’ve got going with these three. It seems to me that Jane (Is that Maid’s name? I can’t recall and don’t feel like searching through the pages for it) is much more naturally a switch than Butler seems to be in SBB, as I’ve always had the impression that Jefferson is a Dom only when John commands him to be (not complaining about that dynamic, if that’s the case–I actually quite enjoy it because it adds an interesting twist to their play). Looking forward to more of these ladies.
FWIW, I agree on not employing much (or any) objectification in these stories of the ladies; I’d far rather have sexual tension based on personality and interaction then on revealing ladies’ bodies any day. And I also like the more tender-but-firm side of a Domme.
Yeah I’m looking forward to a story with Jane and Jeanne fighting over Domming Jacqueline! The idea of Jefferson going up against John is almost hilarious in my mind.
Mmm~ yes please to Jane and Jeanne fighting to be the dom! ^///^
This is interesting ~ I am not fully sold on this series, and acknowledge it’s only one tiny view into their lives. I enjoy this story and look forward to tasting a bit more =3
I think you’re doing well.
I admit, because I have had “mean girl” experiences, that I flinch when I’m not sure about the consensuality of the situation.
so I ask :)
and either you or your readers let me know what’s up :) And i feel better :)
I like the boys, but I admit, not being a boy, it s easier for me to sidestep. That is to say, If i were a boy, I’d be writing a flipped version of this same note :)
So, yes :) I like, and when i feel scared/uncomfy, I’ll ask :)
Thank you for writing and sharing your work :)
(kinda excited to know if victorian women had a version of strap on, or other interesting toys…. :) perhaps a “percusser”? :-D )
I was considering what kind of toys ladies of the time would have access to- I get a bit creative in some of the stories as I’m also considering what people of the time would have been able to *make* as well. :D
Looking forward to what you find!!! ?
I think you succeeded in your aims. Or at least you did with me as a reader! ^^
It’s interesting, but I’ll probably skip the next time you run them. I honestly wasn’t able to identify with these characters or the scenario. Just fell flat, for me.
I feel similar, the story is probably too short for them to show any kind of personality. They seemed completely one-dimentional.
Also – Buttlers were attractive, while here we have only one pretty maid. But this part is probably only my personal taste.
Only one pretty maid? Oh, well I can confirm that it’s your personal taste, at least ^_^ I find all three of them stunning, particularly Madame.
As for showing personality, to be honest, I got the same kind of impression after reading the very first chapter of Buttlers, and then liked them much better after another couple of chapters that revealed more about them.
See, I didn’t find any of them particularly attractive anyway, but I’m pretty hetero. But with Buttlers, I was able to identify with the scenario as something I’d enjoy, which probably helped pull me in better. This one, not so much.
I’ll probably still end up reading future segments since I love Tab’s work all in all, but this one just isn’t high on my list.
I also think all three are attractive in different ways. I didn’t expect Madame to be as attractive as she is from the preview pictures, but her body and face are also very elegant.
I am slowly starting to like their dynamic. So far I feel like I know the least about Jaqueline, but Jane is cute and Madame is classy.
The one thing I miss is that in the first Buttlers story, you didn’t know what was going on or who these characters were in real life. There’s not as much mystery in this one.
Just for the information. In frenh, you will rather write “Fin”, instead of “La fin” as in “The end”. It is a small mistake I often see on the internet so I wanted to kindly underline it.
By the way, I really like your comics. I read all of them and now I’m waiting for more ^^
Don’t hesitate to point out any mistake in my english, as you might have guessed, it’s not my mother tongue.
Updated! I think Fin sounds really short to me as an English person used to The End XD
I really enjoyed this. I don’t get to see many stories with multiple women involved that don’t make me cringe, and I just kept wanting more. It was nice to see the firm but caring nature, and it works really well with them. There will always be a soft spot in my heart for boys with boys, but I’m really hoping you don’t stop here. I’ve loved not having the explicit nakedness that you did with they boys, because it really allows for us to create that on our own. I’ve always adored the way you don’t shy from different body shapes, which makes this feel so much more real.
Whatever way you go, thank you so much for everything you’ve done. This was a wonderful read! <3 (and I'm still smiling over Jane's little <3 when she was gazing down loveliness)
Thank you! “Didn’t make me cringe” is an excellent review XD
I think it’s weird how porn with ladies seems to rarely be about how much they’re actually enjoying themselves? Ahhh the smut industry, why you so set in your ways…
You’re welcome! You should take it as a major awesome review! If it involves women and sexy times, I’m usually like, “Naw, bb, it’s good.” It’s just, yes, the smut industry is weird, and the stuff they do isn’t real, and I would love to see things where the women actually seem to be enjoying themselves, and not in a weird, obviously fake, way. It’s nice to see them take time to play and it was delightful to read!
Honestly, I found this chapter very sweet. I like how Jane can be a bit of a brat, but it over all very playful. I loved the Madame as well. She did come off a little strict, but caring.
Plus, tall, elegant, older subs need more loving ^_^
I really do love these three, and I hope we get to check in on them from time to time, and learn more about them.
Hello, I am very very much into this and looking forward to more, I have so much trouble finding decent… I mean, good smut with ladies enjoying themselves ;_____;
These characters definitely work for me and I am already enjoying their relationship, though I appreciated it through the visuals and actions more than through the dialogue.
Also, I am not a foot person but I do love how you’ve drawn Madame’s feet and how she uses them. They’re kind of… expressive, somehow. xD
I really liked your stocks and bonds chapter. I think the women might improvise something like that, say each limb tied to one corner of a doorway. the light bondage was hot here. I like to see women with hungry/ satisfied/ecstatic looking eyes and mouths, and this last page got the closest to that. The motion in this chapter seemed kind of awkward to me? So many changes in location. It seems rather inconvenient to have a super slow build in different places all over the house.
I really loved this chapter, there are sooo many male-on-male smut comics out there on the internet, and it’s an awesome change to see female-on-female ones, ESPECIALLY with kink involved – those seem almost non-existent.
Honestly, I think your fanbase prefers the former sort of comic, which is maybe why the response here is not so enthusiastic as it has been with the Gay Buttlers. That being said, I would love to see more of this series, especially as a queer kinky lady!
I love this so much! Thank you! I wish you’d do more. BTW yes they had dildos and strap-ons. The dildos were made of stuffed leather (the ones I’ve heard of, anyway). I’ve been meaning to make one. In a lot of the period erotica the dildos come complete with milk-filled balls, which the top is supposed to squeeze into the bottom at just the right time. You can tell the stories were written by men hahaha