Shades Of A 028
Some more book comparison:
We stroll back to the hotel, and I’d like to say it’s in companionable silence. He at least looks his usual calm, collected self. As for me, I’m desperately trying to gauge how our little coffee morning has gone. I feel like I’ve been interviewed for a job, but I’m not sure what for.
“Do you always wear jeans?” he asks out of the blue.
“Mostly.”
He nods.
Holy shit this is tense.
Epic 50 shades excerpt is epic.
I kinda want to read fifty shades now for comparison, but then I don’t.
Don’t do it. Just rely on me to bring you the special bits :P
Brave heart, you.
Just don’t get scarred for life during the process.
I applaud your bravery, oh great one!
Yay for Tab giving us the super special awesome bits of 50 Shades and thus saving us from our destructive curiosity that can only lead to a terrible case of bad-writing-and-terrible-plot-itis!
Never read 50 shades my mother did and I just asked her about it. It’s interesting seeing your excerpts though. I’m really enjoying them vs the page in question ^u^
Aw man, so did mine. The sad part is I think she was doing it to better understand my “lifestyle choices.” Haha. I kept telling her that wasn’t how most BDSM experiences go, but I think by that point she was just reading for the sex scenes.
I just love these two so much. ^_^
Insert drama! Dun, dun, dun….
I’m not going to bother reading the book. I don’t feel tempted to read the book. But it’s fun to read the lines you compare with what’s going on in the comic.
Oh no! You gave Ron’s line to Hermione! :-P
LOL. What the hell is that writer on? I like your version way better.
..Aren’t they on the wrong side of the bike in the last panel? Or did Anwar circle all the way around the bike? I don’t get how they got into that position.
I think instead of panning to the right, it’s a left-side view. It is a little bit of an awkward angle change, but it makes sense if you think about it.
There is a bit of guard rail on both sides of the frame above it, if you look closely you can see it on Anwar’s side. It looks like Anwar pulled Chris to his side to me.
If he did wouldn’t the bike be going the other way?
yup, i agree, with the left side view, it only makes sense (in my head at least) that the bike would be going the opposite direction in panel 4, but that would totally look awkward, and the transition between this page and the next one would be broken. An ‘easy’ solution would to have Anwar and Chris switch places in panel 3, than it would all be smooth and well. but anyway i had no problems with getting what was going on, and Tab is the master here so… (also on a sidenote whenever there is a new page it brightens me day so thanks Tab!)
It’s good to point these things out anyway. People did the same for me when I had a comic and I really appreciated it.
I really, REALLY, like where this may be going. Those two are so cute, my God XD
There’s a game you can play with some @$$ trying to run people down with a motorcycle or bicycle. I call it the Jonny Evans game. You basically kick him off his vehicle and take it from him. Then your friend has time to beat his head against the road a couple of times. The tactic was originally used in the game and story ‘Roller Ball Murder’.
Het is Ew. 50SoG must be burned to the ground.
Also, this page was intense. That has to be one of the best bicycles I’ve ever seen drawn. They’re exceedingly tough to do!
Dissing any sexuality? Not cool bro.
50 shades has a lot of things wrong with it, but heterosexuality is not one of them.
I love your storytelling, Tab <3
Oops replied to wrong thing. But do like you addressing this comment, too.
Only ‘sexuality’ I dis is pædophilia, rape, and bestiality. Consenting adults is always cool.
I’m sorry, it wasn’t my intention to be offensive. I was joking around this TVTrope: http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/HetIsEw . I guess I wasn’t as obvious as I’d have liked.
I’m reading the trilogy now, thanks to this comic. (Stupid curiosity!) Already on book 2… wasn’t impressed with book one at all, but damn the cliffhanger! Found a free copy on Google Docs, shhhhhhh….as if I’d pay to read this. I’ve read worse…much worse… and I’ve read better.
wait, is this an actual, uh, re-doing of that book? Your version of that book??